My dream(帮我看看有没有语法错误）

My dream(帮我看看有没有语法错误）
307字作文:My dream　　YaoMing is a basketball player,he play for the Houston Rockets in the NBA.YaoMing p

My dream 　
　YaoMing is a basketball player,he play for the Houston Rockets in the NBA.YaoMing plays basketball pertty welland he is very tall. 　
　My dream is going to be a basketball player like him and join the China's national team.But I can't,because I'm not good at basketball.What a pity!But I cannot give up I still can face my dream diligently. 　
　Because that's my dream!